Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, February 26, 2019
Living springs camp reflection
dislikes: My least favorite part was the big walk to the farm and then up the hill, on the first day of camp our teachers said we would meet up with a couple of camp instructors and then take a walk to the farm, but then our teachers didn't tell our bus driver so he took us straight to the farm, so our teachers asked him to take us back about twenty minutes so he did and everyone was moaning and groaning. when we got there everyone was still groaning, I asked the instructor Joseph "How long will this walk be"? I questioned almost wanting him to think it was a rhetorical question "about three kilometers to the farm" he remarked "oh no" I chatted in disappointment.
Likes: I enjoyed when Mr. Bell took us for a run in the morning it was me, Liam, Riley, Ollie, Jack, and Mr. Bell we were running on the up the hill and running down the hill which really hurt my knees, we were halfway into the run and then we decided to take our shirts off, we ran through the forest trying to dodge the stinging nettle it was a hard run but it was fun and worth it.
Challenges: The biggest challenge for me was for me to leave camp, I had a blast of a time at camp all the activities were amazing and the food was brilliant especially the burgers and when I had to leave I was devastated also knowing I would have to do that useless walk again.
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kia Ora Max
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you put lot's of detail in in this Living Springs camp reflection. the facts you have used are really good. I liked how you have put lot's of writing like your dislikes your favourite part and put some paragraphs in this. Maybe you could a little bit more detail in this refection but other then that it was great, I am looking forward to see more work on your blog
Thankyou Liam,
ReplyDeleteIt was very nice of you to ad this comment, only one mistake you put to in's in your comment.
i like it it has a lot of cool staf
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ReplyDeleteI am Tayla from Marshland School
I really enjoyed your recount as it made me think about the camp that we went on. I agree that it was very devastating and I wish we could go again.
I really like the words you have used as they were very descriptive. Maybe next time use more capital letters in your writing. Anyway its very good keep up the great work 10/10.
-Tayla :)
Kia ora Max I really like how you set it out, maybe next time you I could add some capital letters great job I loved it thanks for sharing your reflection what was your favourite activity?
ReplyDeletei liked your descriptive words. i to disliked the walk.made you can add a chashey tilt
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Max. I liked the part where you talked about the running. I learnt about getting up early and getting a good morning run. Next time you could work on adding some full stops where they're needed. Well done Max. Jaydee:)
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