Have you done anything naughty? Be honest!
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Monday, March 2, 2020
This is just to say
We were involved in the get NZ writing and we are writing poems based on William Carlos William's poem this is just to stay.
Have you done anything naughty? Be honest!
Have you done anything naughty? Be honest!
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Talofa Max, Max here again I liked the way you changed the words into your own. The part in the poem where it says and it hit him in the face reminded me of when I am with my siblings. To improve you could add a bit more descriptive words?. Thanks for posting see you next time.
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