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Friday, April 24, 2020

ANZAC diary entry

 Kia ora bloggers I'm Max from marshland school and for our lockdown learning on Thursday we had to choose between three tasks to do, write a letter as a Gallipoli shoulder, write a diary entry as a Gallipoli soldier or do a poster about what something was like in Gallipoli I chose a diary entry, hope you enjoyed. what are you doing for lockdown learning?



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  1. AnonymousApril 28, 2020 at 12:42 PM

    Hey Max, wow, what a powerful piece of writing. It's quite hard to imagine going through something so scary, not knowing what was going to happen next. I can tell you have done a lot of research about what it was like for the soldiers at war, well done. Don't forget to proofread and fix up spelling mistakes underlined. I hope you are enjoying your long weekend. Keep up the great work. Caitlin :)

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  2. Carolyn DaviesMay 4, 2020 at 12:29 PM

    Hey Max, I like you Gallipoli letter as you have clearly understood how life would be so hard in the trenches. You have used some awesome vocabulary too to really make it sound interesting. Well done

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